Thursday, February 21, 2008

Inokura Elementary School

Today I'm going to share an "imposed" composition by three of my sixth grade English students. They actually weren't too thrilled about the idea of writing anything at all, but I thought it would be interesting for them to see their composition in English on my blog so please bear with us. First of all, they had no idea how to write a composition to begin with. I think this is a skill that is sorely lacking among Japanese students and even my own son, who is in college in the States, claims that he was never taught to write compositions, at least not like American children are taught. I would have liked to have each child write a little bit about the school and then I'd translate it into English for him, but in the end they didn't know where to start and I just interviewed them (in Japanese), recorded their responses (in Japanese) and then translated. It wasn't much of an English class but anyway...

"Our school is called Inokura Elementary School. It is a two story building and is painted white. When you go onto the schoolground you can see a great big tree and on the playground there are jungle gyms, soccer goals and a baseball diamond. When we enter the school we walk up the steps to the entrance and the first things that we see are the school shoe cubbies, the faucets and sinks and the boys' and girls' bathrooms. At the shoe cubbies, everyone takes off their shoes and puts them in their own cubby and then puts on rubber room shoes. Whenever we go outside, we put our room shoes back in the cubby and put our own shoes back on.
(Pictures of the entryway cubbies and room shoes left in front of the gymnasium.)

In the left wing of the first floor of the school is the teachers' room where all the teachers have their desks. In the right wing is the first graders' classroom. Our sixth grade class is upstairs at the top of the stairway. First and second grade classrooms are downstairs but third grade through sixth grade are upstairs. Except for fifth grade, there is only one class in each of the grades. Inokura School is considered a small school. Our sixth grade class has 37 students and we have been together in the same class since first grade. This year we have a man teacher.
(Picture of the hallway in front of the first grade classroom.)

Every morning, the sixth graders clean the stairways and the front entryway and put up the flag. During the week we study language, math, science, social studies, music, morals, art and P.E. and on Thursdays we have English. Once a week we do calligraphy. After school we have clubs and student body meetings. Our favorite class is P.E. Right now we are doing jump rope and vaulting. We have a jump rope competition coming up soon.
(Picture of an ikebana arrangement near the shoe cubbies.)

The best thing about our school is that the playground is very big and we can play a lot. Inokura school doesn't have that many students (193) but we are all good friends and very, very cheerful. We think we are very lucky to live in the natural surroundings of Nikko."
(Ryutaro, Atsuki and Akane.)


Hmmm. What do you think? I could have started teaching them about an introduction, a body of a composition and a conclusion but I'm their English teacher, not their language teacher. I'll print out this blog post for each of them and hopefully one of them will one day be inspired to put more of their thoughts down in writing.
(And by the way, though somewhat on the quiet side, all three of them are very good students. They often come to my house early and end up helping me cook dinner or do some small chore for me. Sometimes I think they learn more English that way than when we open up our books and notebooks and "study".

7 comments:

meggie said...

They are such healthy beautiful looking children. Tell them we appreciate getting to learn a little about their school.
Thankyou to you, & the children.

Clare said...

What an interesting post. It's fascinating comparing schools around the world.

Alex is doing composition in English and French and she hasn't got the foggiest!!!! Your pupils' one is a lot better than hers.

The Calico Cat said...

I bet they do learn more English "in real life" than from a "class."

Morals - are studied in school... Over here I am sure that more than one family would be up in arms...

This is a touch subject & does not mean the same thing to everyone...

peggy said...

One of the complaints I had when my children were in school in CA was that they never teach writing skills. To this day, my sons (both are college grads, one has a master's) are not great at composition. And I don't think either one of them has a clue how to correctly punctuate a paragraph. It sounds like it a universal issue.

Shelina said...

I think they did a super job. Writing is a skill that isn't taught nearly as much as I would have liked here either.

I too was struck that they were being taught morals. What do they learn in the morals class?

Marilyn R said...

Please thank you students for sharing about their school! It is very interesting. I never realized how many times street shoes were taken off and exchanged for other shoes each day. Wow! Are there special shoes for the school bathrooms too? Just wondering.

atet said...

Tanya -- please thank your students for sharing a bit about their school with us. It's wonderful to read about. As for the composition -- why not use it as a way to teach English? As an "English" teacher here in the states -- that's what I concentrate on. Writing. It's part of learning the langugage and the culture. That form of composition is pretty uniquely western and the form isn't taught in all countries. It could be a way to practice their English in a new way. As for learning more when they help you around the house? Um, they probably do. The "book work" parts of the lesson are necessary, but children learn more when they have to put things in practice and they see a real world application for what they have learned in books. Keep on having them help, play games, give them simulations of "real world" activities (maybe pretending they are going shopping in the states, etc.) -- they will be able to apply all of that book learning and it will stick with them much longer!